This is a page that won’t be in the final version of Sorcerer’s Apprentice volume 1. My publisher rejected this page because they found the pacing to be too fast. This is part of a 3-4 page scene that cut out because of pacing. The redone version actually looks even better than this version. But that page you won’t see unless you pick up the book. I’m scheduled to finish the book in April, so a release date should be out soon.
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